Mechanical Engineer – New York based
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for prose.
We need to preserve all substantive information; not invent or summarize away detail. Must not omit details.
Let's craft About the role paragraph: combine intro, description of role, mission, etc. Must include all details from intro and "Why Join Us?" and company background? That's a lot. We need to preserve all substantive information; cannot omit. So we need to include everything from the posting except boilerplate (cookie/navigation/legal/EEO/equal-opportunity/scam-warning, duplicated lines, application instructions). The company background paragraphs are substantive; we should include them. The "Why Join Us?" also substantive. So About the role will be long paragraph(s) containing all that descriptive text.
We must not repeat the job title as a heading. Already not.
We must not put Job ID/requisition numbers as headings; none present.
We must remove duplicated lines: check for duplicates: The intro repeats "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien". Also later "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader..." Might be duplicate but we can keep both? The rule: remove duplicated lines. So we should avoid repeating same sentence. We'll need to deduplicate.
Let's extract unique substantive sentences.
I'll parse the posting:
Paragraph 1: "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien has an immediate opening for a Mechanical Engineer to join our team in New York. We are seeking a highly skilled Mechanical Engineer to join our mission-critical data center engineering team."
Paragraph 2: "In this role, you will lead the design, modeling, and coordination of complex mechanical systems for hyperscale and AI-driven data centers across the United States. Your expertise will cover HVAC, piping, plumbing, cooling towers, chilled water systems, and other high-performance infrastructure that supports some of the largest technology clients in the world."
Paragraph 3: "As a key member of our team, you will be responsible for managing all phases of mechanical engineering design and execution - from developing calculations and technical documentation, to leading BIM coordination and supervising on-site construction activities. You will ensure that all systems meet the highest standards of efficiency, sustainability, safety, and compliance with codes and client requirements."
Paragraph 4: "If you are a driven, detail-oriented engineer with a passion for innovation and collaboration, this is an excellent opportunity to contribute to the design and delivery of world-class, energy-efficient data center facilities."
Then "What We Offer:" bullet list.
Then "What You Will Do:" bullet list.
Then "What We Expect:" bullet list.
Then "Why Join Us?" paragraph: "Work on cutting-edge data center projects in a fast-growing industry. Opportunity to collaborate with industry-leading professionals and firms. Competitive salary, benefits, and career growth opportunities. Dynamic environment fostering creativity through exposure to diverse technologies and experiences. This ranges from designing energy-efficient facilities, site supervision for multi-million-dollar facilities, to the production of digital twins, drawings, three-dimensional building modeling, computational fluid dynamics, and the development of custom controls software."
Then company description: "Ehvert Mission Critical specializes in the design and construction management of data centers. We are a business unit within Salas O’Brien - a 4,000-person engineering and professional services firm, widely recognized for its extensive expertise and impressive project portfolio. With more than 10,000 projects annually and 100 offices across North America, Salas O'Brien is ranked #39 on Engineering News-Record’s 2024 Top 500 Design Firms list. Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader in data center facility engineering, specializing in hyperscale and AI data centers, designing massive data centers for global tech giants like Microsoft, Uber, Oracle, and Amazon. Our projects involve complex electrical, mechanical, automation, and security systems necessary to power, cool, and secure these high-demand facilities, often exceeding loads of 100 MW per facility and up to 500 MW per site. We are recognized for our advanced engineering and construction techniques, including Building Information Modeling (BIM), Virtual Design and Construction (VDC), and augmented reality."
Then "How to Apply:" which is application instructions; we must remove.
Now we need to deduplicate: The phrase "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien" appears multiple times. We'll keep only one occurrence in the About the role section, maybe at start.
Also "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader..." duplicates earlier mention; we can keep but avoid repeating the same phrase exactly. We'll try to rephrase? But we must preserve all substantive information; we cannot invent or summarize away detail, but we can rephrase? The instruction: "Preserve ALL substantive information; do NOT invent or summarize away detail." Rephrasing might be considered summarizing? Safer to keep the exact sentences but avoid duplication. If a sentence appears twice, we can keep one copy. So we need to detect duplicate sentences.
Let's list sentences:
1. Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien has an immediate opening for a Mechanical Engineer to join our team in New York.
2. We are seeking a highly skilled Mechanical Engineer to join our mission-critical data center engineering team.
3. In this role, you will lead the design, modeling, and coordination of complex mechanical systems for hyperscale and AI-driven data centers across the United States.
4. Your expertise will cover HVAC, piping, plumbing, cooling towers, chilled water systems, and other high-performance infrastructure that supports some of the largest technology clients in the world.
5. As a key member of our team, you will be responsible for managing all phases of mechanical engineering design and execution - from developing calculations and technical documentation, to leading BIM coordination and supervising on-site construction activities.
6. You will ensure that all systems meet the highest standards of efficiency, sustainability, safety, and compliance with codes and client requirements.
7. If you are a driven, detail-oriented engineer with a passion for innovation and collaboration, this is an excellent opportunity to contribute to the design and delivery of world-class, energy-efficient data center facilities.
What We Offer bullets (we'll keep as list).
What You Will Do bullets.
What We Expect bullets.
Why Join Us sentences:
8. Work on cutting-edge data center projects in a fast-growing industry.
9. Opportunity to collaborate with industry-leading professionals and firms.
10. Competitive salary, benefits, and career growth opportunities.
11. Dynamic environment fostering creativity through exposure to diverse technologies and experiences.
12. This ranges from designing energy-efficient facilities, site supervision for multi-million-dollar facilities, to the production of digital twins, drawings, three-dimensional building modeling, computational fluid dynamics, and the development of custom controls software.
Company description sentences:
13. Ehvert Mission Critical specializes in the design and construction management of data centers.
14. We are a business unit within Salas O’Brien - a 4,000-person engineering and professional services firm, widely recognized for its extensive expertise and impressive project portfolio.
15. With more than 10,000 projects annually and 100 offices across North America, Salas O'Brien is ranked #39 on Engineering News-Record’s 2024 Top 500 Design Firms list.
16. Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader in data center facility engineering, specializing in hyperscale and AI data centers, designing massive data centers for global tech giants like Microsoft, Uber, Oracle, and Amazon.
17. Our projects involve complex electrical, mechanical, automation, and security systems necessary to power, cool, and secure these high-demand facilities, often exceeding loads of 100 MW per facility and up to 500 MW per site.
18. We are recognized for our advanced engineering and construction techniques, including Building Information Modeling (BIM), Virtual Design and Construction (VDC), and augmented reality.
Now check duplicates: Sentence 1 includes "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien". Sentence 14 also includes "We are a business unit within Salas O’Brien - a 4,000-person..." Not duplicate. Sentence 16 includes "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader..." That's similar to sentence 1 but not identical. So we keep
for prose. We need to preserve all substantive information; not invent or summarize away detail. Must not omit details. Let's craft About the role paragraph: combine intro, description of role, mission, etc. Must include all details from intro and "Why Join Us?" and company background? That's a lot. We need to preserve all substantive information; cannot omit. So we need to include everything from the posting except boilerplate (cookie/navigation/legal/EEO/equal-opportunity/scam-warning, duplicated lines, application instructions). The company background paragraphs are substantive; we should include them. The "Why Join Us?" also substantive. So About the role will be long paragraph(s) containing all that descriptive text. We must not repeat the job title as a heading. Already not. We must not put Job ID/requisition numbers as headings; none present. We must remove duplicated lines: check for duplicates: The intro repeats "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien". Also later "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader..." Might be duplicate but we can keep both? The rule: remove duplicated lines. So we should avoid repeating same sentence. We'll need to deduplicate. Let's extract unique substantive sentences. I'll parse the posting: Paragraph 1: "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien has an immediate opening for a Mechanical Engineer to join our team in New York. We are seeking a highly skilled Mechanical Engineer to join our mission-critical data center engineering team." Paragraph 2: "In this role, you will lead the design, modeling, and coordination of complex mechanical systems for hyperscale and AI-driven data centers across the United States. Your expertise will cover HVAC, piping, plumbing, cooling towers, chilled water systems, and other high-performance infrastructure that supports some of the largest technology clients in the world." Paragraph 3: "As a key member of our team, you will be responsible for managing all phases of mechanical engineering design and execution - from developing calculations and technical documentation, to leading BIM coordination and supervising on-site construction activities. You will ensure that all systems meet the highest standards of efficiency, sustainability, safety, and compliance with codes and client requirements." Paragraph 4: "If you are a driven, detail-oriented engineer with a passion for innovation and collaboration, this is an excellent opportunity to contribute to the design and delivery of world-class, energy-efficient data center facilities." Then "What We Offer:" bullet list. Then "What You Will Do:" bullet list. Then "What We Expect:" bullet list. Then "Why Join Us?" paragraph: "Work on cutting-edge data center projects in a fast-growing industry. Opportunity to collaborate with industry-leading professionals and firms. Competitive salary, benefits, and career growth opportunities. Dynamic environment fostering creativity through exposure to diverse technologies and experiences. This ranges from designing energy-efficient facilities, site supervision for multi-million-dollar facilities, to the production of digital twins, drawings, three-dimensional building modeling, computational fluid dynamics, and the development of custom controls software." Then company description: "Ehvert Mission Critical specializes in the design and construction management of data centers. We are a business unit within Salas O’Brien - a 4,000-person engineering and professional services firm, widely recognized for its extensive expertise and impressive project portfolio. With more than 10,000 projects annually and 100 offices across North America, Salas O'Brien is ranked #39 on Engineering News-Record’s 2024 Top 500 Design Firms list. Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader in data center facility engineering, specializing in hyperscale and AI data centers, designing massive data centers for global tech giants like Microsoft, Uber, Oracle, and Amazon. Our projects involve complex electrical, mechanical, automation, and security systems necessary to power, cool, and secure these high-demand facilities, often exceeding loads of 100 MW per facility and up to 500 MW per site. We are recognized for our advanced engineering and construction techniques, including Building Information Modeling (BIM), Virtual Design and Construction (VDC), and augmented reality." Then "How to Apply:" which is application instructions; we must remove. Now we need to deduplicate: The phrase "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien" appears multiple times. We'll keep only one occurrence in the About the role section, maybe at start. Also "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader..." duplicates earlier mention; we can keep but avoid repeating the same phrase exactly. We'll try to rephrase? But we must preserve all substantive information; we cannot invent or summarize away detail, but we can rephrase? The instruction: "Preserve ALL substantive information; do NOT invent or summarize away detail." Rephrasing might be considered summarizing? Safer to keep the exact sentences but avoid duplication. If a sentence appears twice, we can keep one copy. So we need to detect duplicate sentences. Let's list sentences: 1. Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien has an immediate opening for a Mechanical Engineer to join our team in New York. 2. We are seeking a highly skilled Mechanical Engineer to join our mission-critical data center engineering team. 3. In this role, you will lead the design, modeling, and coordination of complex mechanical systems for hyperscale and AI-driven data centers across the United States. 4. Your expertise will cover HVAC, piping, plumbing, cooling towers, chilled water systems, and other high-performance infrastructure that supports some of the largest technology clients in the world. 5. As a key member of our team, you will be responsible for managing all phases of mechanical engineering design and execution - from developing calculations and technical documentation, to leading BIM coordination and supervising on-site construction activities. 6. You will ensure that all systems meet the highest standards of efficiency, sustainability, safety, and compliance with codes and client requirements. 7. If you are a driven, detail-oriented engineer with a passion for innovation and collaboration, this is an excellent opportunity to contribute to the design and delivery of world-class, energy-efficient data center facilities. What We Offer bullets (we'll keep as list). What You Will Do bullets. What We Expect bullets. Why Join Us sentences: 8. Work on cutting-edge data center projects in a fast-growing industry. 9. Opportunity to collaborate with industry-leading professionals and firms. 10. Competitive salary, benefits, and career growth opportunities. 11. Dynamic environment fostering creativity through exposure to diverse technologies and experiences. 12. This ranges from designing energy-efficient facilities, site supervision for multi-million-dollar facilities, to the production of digital twins, drawings, three-dimensional building modeling, computational fluid dynamics, and the development of custom controls software. Company description sentences: 13. Ehvert Mission Critical specializes in the design and construction management of data centers. 14. We are a business unit within Salas O’Brien - a 4,000-person engineering and professional services firm, widely recognized for its extensive expertise and impressive project portfolio. 15. With more than 10,000 projects annually and 100 offices across North America, Salas O'Brien is ranked #39 on Engineering News-Record’s 2024 Top 500 Design Firms list. 16. Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader in data center facility engineering, specializing in hyperscale and AI data centers, designing massive data centers for global tech giants like Microsoft, Uber, Oracle, and Amazon. 17. Our projects involve complex electrical, mechanical, automation, and security systems necessary to power, cool, and secure these high-demand facilities, often exceeding loads of 100 MW per facility and up to 500 MW per site. 18. We are recognized for our advanced engineering and construction techniques, including Building Information Modeling (BIM), Virtual Design and Construction (VDC), and augmented reality. Now check duplicates: Sentence 1 includes "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien". Sentence 14 also includes "We are a business unit within Salas O’Brien - a 4,000-person..." Not duplicate. Sentence 16 includes "Ehvert Mission Critical, a business unit within Salas O’Brien is an industry leader..." That's similar to sentence 1 but not identical. So we keep