Family Advocate- Watervliet/ Bangor
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We need to preserve all substantive information; do not invent or summarize away detail.
We need to avoid filler like "commensurate with experience", "not specified", etc. We have specific details.
We need to ensure we don't include EEO boilerplate.
Let's craft.
About the role: Use the Position Summary paragraph: "Assists in classroom coverage, planning and implementation of family engagement requirements to assure compliance with Performance Standards. Including: Family Partnership Agreements, recruitment, enrollment, attendance analysis & follow up, community out-reach and family engagement. Job requires travel between Flowers Early Learning locations and/or program participants’ homes. Gathers resource information and makes referrals for family growth. Partners with families and staff to complete necessary Health requirements."
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. Responsibilities: Could be a list of duties derived from that paragraph. But we must not invent; we can list the items explicitly mentioned: Family Partnership Agreements, recruitment, enrollment, attendance analysis & follow up, community out-reach and family engagement; travel between locations and/or participants’ homes; gathering resource information and making referrals for family growth; partnering with families and staff to complete necessary health requirements. Also maybe "planning and implementation of family engagement requirements". We'll put as
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Requirements: Minimum experience entry-level? Actually they say Minimum Experience Entry-level. But also Education Requirement: HS Diploma/GED with Two years’ experience in related field. So we can list: High school diploma or GED; two years’ experience in a related field. Also selection criteria: must be 18 years of age; valid driver’s license; own reliable transportation; pass physical examination; comprehensive fingerprinted criminal background check; pre-employment drug screen negative for amphetamines, cannabinoids, cocaine, opiates, PCP. We'll list as
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Qualifications: Preferred: Associates Degree or Bachelors’ Degree in Social Services, Human Services, Family Services, related field or Family Service Credential within 18 months of hire. We'll list as
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... Make sure no extra whitespace? It's fine. Let's craft the content precisely. About the role paragraph: Use exactly as in posting: "Assists in classroom coverage, planning and implementation of family engagement requirements to assure compliance with Performance Standards. Including: Family Partnership Agreements, recruitment, enrollment, attendance analysis & follow up, community out-reach and family engagement. Job requires travel between Flowers Early Learning locations and/or program participants’ homes. Gathers resource information and makes referrals for family growth. Partners with families and staff to complete necessary Health requirements." We need to keep the same punctuation. Responsibilities list items: - Family Partnership Agreements - recruitment - enrollment - attendance analysis & follow up - community out-reach and family engagement - travel between Flowers Early Learning locations and/or program participants’ homes - gathering resource information and making referrals for family growth - partnering with families and staff to complete necessary health requirements We could also include "planning and implementation of family engagement requirements" but that's covered in about role. We'll keep as above. Requirements list: - High school diploma or GED - Two years’ experience in a related field - Minimum age 18 years - Valid driver’s license - Own reliable transportation - Pass a physical examination - Comprehensive fingerprinted criminal background check - Pre-employment drug screen with negative results for amphetamines, cannabinoids (including marijuana/THC), cocaine, opiates, and phencyclidine (PCP) Note: The posting says "Marijuana is not legal at the federal level and is prohibited in the workplace or in one's system, even if legally prescribed." That's part of drug screen policy; we can include as note but it's still substantive. We could add as a note after list, but we can incorporate in the drug screen bullet: "including marijuana/THC". Already included. Qualifications list: - Associate’s degree or Bachelor’s degree in Social Services, Human Services, Family Services, or related field - Family Service Credential (to be obtained within 18 months of hire) We could phrase as "Preferred - Associates Degree or Bachelors’ Degree in Social Services, Human Services, Family Services, related field or Family Service Credential within 18 months of hire." We'll put as bullet points. Benefits list: - Medical, dental, vision, & life insurance - 401(k) with employer contribution - Assistance in furthering your education - Paid time off - Earned sick time - Paid parental leave - Paid holidays and breaks - Paid weather days - Tuition reimbursement - Employee assistance program - Wellness committee resources (enhance life outside of work) We need to keep exact phrasing: "We offer medical, dental, vision, & life insurance, 401(k) with employer contribution, and assistance in furthering your education. Other benefits include paid time off, earned sick time, paid parental leave, paid holidays and breaks, paid weather days, tuition reimbursement, and an employee assistance program. Our wellness committee is dedicated in providing resources that enhance your life outside of work." We could break into list items: medical, dental, vision, & life insurance; 401(k) with employer contribution; assistance in furthering your education; paid time off; earned sick time; paid parental leave; paid holidays and breaks; paid weather days; tuition reimbursement; employee assistance program; wellness committee resources that enhance your life outside of work. Pay section: Include both compensation range and education-based rates. We could write: "Compensation range: $15.68–$20.94 per hour (DOE). Rate of pay based on education: High School Diploma/GED: $15.96/hr; Family Services Credential:
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Pay: we have compensation range $15.68-$20.94 (DOE) and also rate of pay based on education. We should include both. We'll put as
maybe with both. Schedule: Expected Schedule: Monday- Friday, 8:00a-4:30p, 40 hours per week. Work hours may vary due to daily schedule, season, and work duties. May include once a month transport for Policy Council, evening hours as required by program schedule for Freddy Night and or to attend community events. Also Job Type: Full Time, Year-Round (12-months), Hourly, Non-Exempt. We'll include that. We must not include duplicated lines like "Privacy Policy Job Openings Family Advocate- Watervliet/ Bangor Family Services - Watervliet, Michigan Department Family Services Employment Type Full YR FT Minimum Experience Entry-level Compensation $15.68-$20.94 (DOE)" etc. Now produce HTML fragment. We'll start with
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Requirements: Minimum experience entry-level? Actually they say Minimum Experience Entry-level. But also Education Requirement: HS Diploma/GED with Two years’ experience in related field. So we can list: High school diploma or GED; two years’ experience in a related field. Also selection criteria: must be 18 years of age; valid driver’s license; own reliable transportation; pass physical examination; comprehensive fingerprinted criminal background check; pre-employment drug screen negative for amphetamines, cannabinoids, cocaine, opiates, PCP. We'll list as