Surface Ship Maintenance Project Manager
for each section heading.
We need to preserve all substantive info, not invent or summarize away detail. Use - for any list of duties/requirements/benefits. Use
for prose.
We need to ensure we don't include boilerplate like company overview beyond role? The "Company Overview" after the role description includes generic Serco info; we should remove cookie/navigation/legal/EEO/equal-opportunity/scam-warning boilerplate, duplicated lines, and application instructions. The company overview may be considered boilerplate? It's generic about Serco; but it's substantive? It describes Serco's mission, employee count, etc. Might be considered part of posting but not specific to role. The instruction: "Remove cookie/navigation/legal/EEO/equal-opportunity/scam-warning boilerplate, duplicated lines, and application instructions." The company overview is not explicitly listed as boilerplate, but it's generic marketing. However we need to preserve ALL substantive information; does that include company overview? It's not directly about the role but could be considered substantive. However the instruction says "Prefer a few substantive sections over many thin ones." Might be okay to include a brief paragraph about Serco as part of About the role? But we already have About the role covering role specifics. The company overview could be considered extra but not required. To be safe, we could include a short paragraph about Serco as part of About the role or maybe a separate section "About Serco". But the instruction only lists allowed headings: About the role, Responsibilities, Requirements, Qualifications, Skills, Benefits, Pay, Schedule. So we cannot add other headings. So we must fit company overview into one of those sections, likely About the role. So we can include a paragraph about Serco within About the role.
Thus About the role: combine location, clearance, overview of NASO, Serco size, mission.
Now we need to ensure we don't include duplicated lines. We'll need to extract unique content.
Let's draft.
About the role (
About the role
):
Position: Project Manager, Serco’s Naval Acquisition and Sustainment Operation (NASO) located in Pearl Harbor, HI. The role requires maintaining a DoD Secret level clearance. NASO is part of Serco’s Maritime, Engineering, Technology, and Sustainment Business Unit, providing critical services to nearly all U.S. Navy surface ships, submarines and craft. Serco employs over 9,000 people across North America and is committed to forming long‑term partnerships with Federal, State and local government customers to achieve their mission.
That seems good.
Responsibilities (Responsibilities
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We need to list duties from "In This Role You Will". Let's extract bullet points:
- Lead teams providing technical guidance to Ship's Force relating to work on Hull, Mechanical & Electrical (HM&E) and aviation equipment and systems which interface with combat support systems, and hull support items such as damage control equipment for flooding and fire, climate control/ventilation systems, tank and voids, plenums, etc., habitability improvements, and piping systems.
- Lead the performance of inspections, examinations, analysis, repairs incidental to such and make recommendations in the areas of maintenance planning and/or repair as requested on naval propulsion and auxiliary machinery associated with high pressure steam propulsion plants and U.S. Naval Surface Force Ship propulsion plants and auxiliaries.
- Liaison with ship’s reactor department is required prior to accomplishing inspections, testing, and production work.
- Manage teams performing, assisting, or providing technical guidance on the performance of fault identification and support Ship's Force with physical repairs of the types of naval propulsion and auxiliary and aviation/flight deck equipment/combat systems and systems set forth herein.
- Responsible for technical support and advice to Ship's Force pertinent to the operation, overhaul, and repair of specific items of auxiliary machinery, electrical, and hull support and aviation systems as directed by the appropriate technical authority.
- Oversee the performance or provide guidance IAW Corrosion Control Assessment and Maintenance Manual (CCAMM) for the Maintenance System Work Package Planning (MSWP) (T-9630-ABMMD-010/all USN hulls) to Ship's Force with training, inspection and reporting of tanks, voids, plenums, bilges, catwalks, pump room decks, and Aqueous Film Forming Foam (AFFF) station decks.
- Perform or provide technical guidance in support of TYCOM Cableway Improvement Program (CIP) in accordance with NAVSEAINST 9304 series to Ship's Force with training, inspection, repair assistance and reporting.
- Develop updated training package to the TYCOM and to the RMCs. Provide formal on-board operator and maintenance training to Ship’s Force.
- Develop Formal Work Packages (FWPs) and Controlled Work Packages (CWPs) in accordance with the Joint Fleet Maintenance Manual.
- Manage personnel as required to support short-term and long-term contract efforts.
- Cultivating positive relationships with internal and external stakeholders.
We need to ensure we don't duplicate. Some sentences are long; we can keep as list items.
Requirements (Requirements
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We need to include education/experience/clearance etc from "To Be Successful In This Role, You Will Have". Also maybe include travel requirement.
List:
- Bachelor's Degree with a minimum of seven years’ experience in related engineering management field, or Associates Degree with fourteen (14) years’ experience in related engineering management field.
- Five years’ supervisory experience in the area of technical assistance, maintenance, or design related to surface ships.
- Active DoD security clearance is required.
- Three years should be closely involved with practical surface ship maintenance, design, operation, and other problems of main propulsion, auxiliary, electrical, and damage control equipment associated with shipboard level maintenance.
- Two years direct experience with auxiliary, electrical, and damage control systems and included steam propulsion plants.
- Two years direct experience with auxiliary, electrical and damage control systems for U.S. Naval Ships.
- Two years of supervisory experience.
- Up to 25% of travel for CONUS/OCONUS may be required.
Note there is some redundancy: "Five years’ supervisory experience" and "Two years of supervisory experience". Both appear; we should keep both
for prose. We need to ensure we don't include boilerplate like company overview beyond role? The "Company Overview" after the role description includes generic Serco info; we should remove cookie/navigation/legal/EEO/equal-opportunity/scam-warning boilerplate, duplicated lines, and application instructions. The company overview may be considered boilerplate? It's generic about Serco; but it's substantive? It describes Serco's mission, employee count, etc. Might be considered part of posting but not specific to role. The instruction: "Remove cookie/navigation/legal/EEO/equal-opportunity/scam-warning boilerplate, duplicated lines, and application instructions." The company overview is not explicitly listed as boilerplate, but it's generic marketing. However we need to preserve ALL substantive information; does that include company overview? It's not directly about the role but could be considered substantive. However the instruction says "Prefer a few substantive sections over many thin ones." Might be okay to include a brief paragraph about Serco as part of About the role? But we already have About the role covering role specifics. The company overview could be considered extra but not required. To be safe, we could include a short paragraph about Serco as part of About the role or maybe a separate section "About Serco". But the instruction only lists allowed headings: About the role, Responsibilities, Requirements, Qualifications, Skills, Benefits, Pay, Schedule. So we cannot add other headings. So we must fit company overview into one of those sections, likely About the role. So we can include a paragraph about Serco within About the role. Thus About the role: combine location, clearance, overview of NASO, Serco size, mission. Now we need to ensure we don't include duplicated lines. We'll need to extract unique content. Let's draft. About the role (
About the role
):Position: Project Manager, Serco’s Naval Acquisition and Sustainment Operation (NASO) located in Pearl Harbor, HI. The role requires maintaining a DoD Secret level clearance. NASO is part of Serco’s Maritime, Engineering, Technology, and Sustainment Business Unit, providing critical services to nearly all U.S. Navy surface ships, submarines and craft. Serco employs over 9,000 people across North America and is committed to forming long‑term partnerships with Federal, State and local government customers to achieve their mission.
That seems good. Responsibilities (