Business Development Manager, AWS Cloud Intelligence , AWS Cloud Intelligence
headings and - for lists,
for prose.
We must not include markdown fences.
We need to ensure we preserve all substantive info; we should not drop any bullet points.
We need to remove boilerplate: equal opportunity, diversity statements, accommodation links, Los Angeles County etc. Also remove repeated lines like "Amazon is an equal opportunity employer..." etc. Also remove "If you have a disability..." etc. Also remove "Our inclusive culture empowers Amazonians..." etc. Also remove "For individuals with disabilities..." etc. Also remove "If the country/region you’re applying in isn’t listed, please contact your Recruiting Partner." Also remove "Learn more about our benefits at https://amazon.jobs/en/benefits." (maybe keep as part of benefits? It's a link; but we could keep the sentence as part of benefits description? It's not boilerplate? It's a link to benefits page; might be considered okay to keep as part of benefits. However it's a generic link; but it's still substantive? It's a reference. I'd keep it as part of benefits description.
We also need to remove "Company - Amazon Web Services, Inc. Job ID: A10539321". Job ID should be dropped.
Now let's craft sections.
About the role: combine the initial paragraphs up to before "Key job responsibilities". Let's extract:
"Join a team of cloud experts focused on uncovering and articulating advantages for AWS Customers! The AWS Cloud Intelligence team is a specialty services organization that provides cloud compete expertise globally. We are subject matter experts (SMEs) covering top and emerging competitors, key domains, and industry segments. Cloud Intelligence enables field teams to help their customers quickly by removing both business and technical blockers in the sales cycle. We advise account teams and their customers through at scale content, gather and analyze insights surrounding comparable cloud providers, and highlight product and position gaps that our customers are experiencing to continuously improve AWS’ overall value proposition. In addition to on-demand self-service resources, the CI team provides targeted support for specific competitive opportunities through one-to-one customer engagements. This team hires SAs and BDMs who are SMEs in one or more public clouds to advise AWS field teams on the best strategies to develop compelling business cases to support customers co-existing and partnering with competing public cloud services. As a Cloud Intelligence Field BDM, you will be a strategic partner to the AWS field sales team. You will help customers understand why AWS is the best cloud partner for their business. You will coach sales teams on how to amplify AWS strengths and create differentiation strategies. As a strategic partner to sales and external customers, you will identify emerging signals and best practices, to serve the broader organization. This position blends business and technology skillsets. Cloud Intelligence Field BDMs drive complex engagements and interact with executive audiences. They also have technical competence that enables them to analyze AWS and other cloud providers. Candidates must have the capability to craft and convey compelling value propositions, and to communicate concepts and stories effectively. We are looking for experience in one or more of the following: market or competitive intelligence, sales, business value engineering, sales enablement, sales coaching, and customer-facing technology sales experience. The ability to successfully differentiate cloud services in competitive market segments is key."
That seems like a good About the role
for prose. We must not include markdown fences. We need to ensure we preserve all substantive info; we should not drop any bullet points. We need to remove boilerplate: equal opportunity, diversity statements, accommodation links, Los Angeles County etc. Also remove repeated lines like "Amazon is an equal opportunity employer..." etc. Also remove "If you have a disability..." etc. Also remove "Our inclusive culture empowers Amazonians..." etc. Also remove "For individuals with disabilities..." etc. Also remove "If the country/region you’re applying in isn’t listed, please contact your Recruiting Partner." Also remove "Learn more about our benefits at https://amazon.jobs/en/benefits." (maybe keep as part of benefits? It's a link; but we could keep the sentence as part of benefits description? It's not boilerplate? It's a link to benefits page; might be considered okay to keep as part of benefits. However it's a generic link; but it's still substantive? It's a reference. I'd keep it as part of benefits description. We also need to remove "Company - Amazon Web Services, Inc. Job ID: A10539321". Job ID should be dropped. Now let's craft sections. About the role: combine the initial paragraphs up to before "Key job responsibilities". Let's extract: "Join a team of cloud experts focused on uncovering and articulating advantages for AWS Customers! The AWS Cloud Intelligence team is a specialty services organization that provides cloud compete expertise globally. We are subject matter experts (SMEs) covering top and emerging competitors, key domains, and industry segments. Cloud Intelligence enables field teams to help their customers quickly by removing both business and technical blockers in the sales cycle. We advise account teams and their customers through at scale content, gather and analyze insights surrounding comparable cloud providers, and highlight product and position gaps that our customers are experiencing to continuously improve AWS’ overall value proposition. In addition to on-demand self-service resources, the CI team provides targeted support for specific competitive opportunities through one-to-one customer engagements. This team hires SAs and BDMs who are SMEs in one or more public clouds to advise AWS field teams on the best strategies to develop compelling business cases to support customers co-existing and partnering with competing public cloud services. As a Cloud Intelligence Field BDM, you will be a strategic partner to the AWS field sales team. You will help customers understand why AWS is the best cloud partner for their business. You will coach sales teams on how to amplify AWS strengths and create differentiation strategies. As a strategic partner to sales and external customers, you will identify emerging signals and best practices, to serve the broader organization. This position blends business and technology skillsets. Cloud Intelligence Field BDMs drive complex engagements and interact with executive audiences. They also have technical competence that enables them to analyze AWS and other cloud providers. Candidates must have the capability to craft and convey compelling value propositions, and to communicate concepts and stories effectively. We are looking for experience in one or more of the following: market or competitive intelligence, sales, business value engineering, sales enablement, sales coaching, and customer-facing technology sales experience. The ability to successfully differentiate cloud services in competitive market segments is key." That seems like a good About the role